Monday, October 28, 2013

Chapter 18

The loss of the briefcase with the ransom money weighed heavily on Ato’s mind as he turned the Volvo from the Tudu Road and onto the road in front of the Ministry of Education offices at Kinbu.  The transport yard at the Kinbu station of the State Transport Corporation was crowded.  He wasn’t very familiar with  the place although he knew the Kinbu area of Central Accra very well.  He didn’t even know there was an STC station there, complete with passenger parking space.

He manouvered  the car  carefully through a maze of hawkers, shoppers and sightseers, trying not to run over any feet.  He found an empty spot, parked the car, got out and opened the door for his wife.  He was trying to be on his best behavior as he tried to set the stage for breaking the news about the missing briefcase to her.

He elbowed his way through the crowd, creating space for Nana Ajoa while keeping a vigilant eye on her purse.  A young man with a huge ‘afro’ stepped in front of them, waving a bottle filled with a  strange pink liquid.

  “Blow your hair!”

Ato shoved him impatiently aside.

  “Hey, hey massa make you no push me, o!  Plent-ay space dey for  everybod-ay.”

Ato grabbed his wife’s left hand and guided her gently through the throng, ignoring the young man’s protest.


There was a Setra bus idling on the loading dock with ‘SOGAKOPE’ showing through its destination display window but no one was boarding or disembarking.  Nana Ajoa was astonished that despite the crowded parking lot, the station itself was relatively quiet.

She knew what her mother looked  like.  Her image was imprinted in her mind’s eye and, since she had started thinking more and more about her, she has began noticing,  each time she looked in the mirror,  that she bore a little resemblance to her.  

As they were walking towards the ticketing window, they saw a woman in a green and grey flowered head scarf, a navy blue blouse with white vertical stripes over GTP textile slit and cover cloth.  She was standing beside a huge ‘chopbox’ with an old but  seemingly expensive suitcase sitting on top of it.  She had her back towards them so it was more out of intuition than recognition that Nana Ajoa called out, ‘Mama!’

Mama Aku nearly jumped but quickly composed herself.  It was well that she did, otherwise she would have  been knocked to the ground when her daughter rushed into her arms.    She began to smile but when she felt Nana Ajoa’s body shaking with sobs, she could not hold back her own tears.  Ato looked around, slightly embarrassed.  But, when he saw two or three strangers wiping tears off their own faces, he was slightly touched.


The drive back to Dansoman was smooth.  Traffic in Accra was always light during the weekends, especially in the mornings. Ato decided to take a longer route to give Mama Aku and Nana Ajoa some time to  strengthen their mother-daughter bond before they got home.  Nana Ajoa had decided to ride in the back seat with her mother so Ato had placed Mama Aku’s suitcase, which was having a hard time fitting in the trunk with the sizeable chop-box, on the passenger seat beside him.    He was happy about Mama Aku’s arrival for many reasons but he was especially grateful that his wife was getting the opportunity to borrow from the  wisdom and comfort of an older woman during a difficult time.  He was also happy about being able to buy some time to think of how to break the news about the lost briefcase to Nana Ajoa.  He felt a sinking feeling in the pit of his stomach as he thought about his own daughter.  He missed her dearly.

Nana Ajoa was surprised to find that her mother spoke Akan very well although she kept switching from dialect to dialect.  Sometimes, in the middle of an Asante Twi sentence, she would swing in a Fante word.  Other times, she would attempt an Akuapem Twi proverb and end it in Fante.  The most important thing for Nana Ajoa, however,  was that they could communicate.  She even enjoyed listening to her mother’s way of speaking Akan.  She kept hugging and laying her head on Mama Aku as if she wanted to make up for all the lost years.  Strangely,  it seemed they had stepped back into each other’s lives as if they had never parted.   

Nana Ajoa kept thinking about her sister too.  In her reply to Nana Ajoa’s letter, Mama Aku had mentioned that she had another daughter in Accra.  As Ato turned the Volvo towards the Asylum Down Road leading to the Overhead Bridge near Kwame Nkrumah Circle, Nana Ajoa was wondering how Baaba would feel when she got back home to meet two new family members.

  “So my sister’s name is Emilia?”

Ato looked back briefly, wondering whether he really heard what he heard, his mind suddenly going back to the night Kwesi had returned home with a prostitute.  But he quickly disnissed that thought, thinking, “certainly, the world cannot be that small.”  He could not see how a woman like Mama Aku could have raised a daughter to become a prostitute.

  “Yes,”  Mama Aku said.  “She used to live with my friend at Lartebiokorshie but my friend doesn’t know where she is now.  We will go and find her after we find my granddaughter.  We shall find them.  Both of them.”

Those words comforted Ato too.  Although he did not believe in voodoo,  he wished Mama Aku had brought some voodoo from Eweland to help find his daughter.

Chapter 17

The three young men looked down into the briefcase full of money, wondering what to.  Mahmoud had a suggestion.  He wanted them to leave the little girl in front of her parents’ house and call the parents to pick her up.  They can then leave the keys of the house  under a rug, split the money and go their separate ways.  Okota did not like the idea of leaving the girl alone by herself until her parents pick her up.  Mahmoud had explained that they could stay in the car and watch her until her parents showed up but Nii Darku thought that would leave them vulnerable if the Police are involved.  His suggestion was that they kill the girl, take the money and run.  Okota objected strongly, saying they would have to kill him before they kill the girl.  His opinion was that Mahmoud should take the money back and just let  events go according to plan.  Both Mahmoud and Nii Darku were worried that the old man could double-cross them in the end if they don’t take the money while they could.

Nii Darku’s suggestion that Baaba be killed put Okota’s nerves on edge.  He had  never imagined that Nii Darku was capable of such thoughts.  He kept wondering whether the many nights of fear and enxiety, tempered by endless joints  and the sudden sight of so much money  were taking a toll on Nii Darku’s mental capacity.  He had often heard that marijuana made people calm and peaceful but he was beginning to doubt that.  He wanted to offer to  take the money back in order to make things easier for everybody but he was scared.  He no longer trusted Mahmoud and Nii Darku to respect Baaba’s life.

Mahmoud snapped the briefcase shut.   A faint glow of orange sunlight was streaming through a parted curtain from a window on the west side of the living room, signaling  approaching dusk.  Okota looked at his watch.  It was 6:27.  He decided to go and check on Baaba.  As he was walking out of the living room, he heard Mahmoud  saying, “I think our work is done.  We wanted the money.  We have it.”
  “No!”  Okota said, stepping back into the living room.  “Our work is not done yet.  There’s a girl here who needs to go back to her parents.  It is our responsibility to make sure that she safely gets back to her parents.  If anything happens to her, you will be surprised that our lives would become even more miserable than it was before this whole nonsense began.”

He walked to the room where they had Baaba locked up.  She was laying on the bed.  Her lunch was still sitting on the small coffee table on which they had placed it, untouched.    He stood in the doorway and watched her for a few minutes.  He felt a light touch on his shoulder.  He  thought it was Nii Darku but he heard Mahmoud’s voice say;
  “You’ve grown to like her very much.”
  “She’s a great kid.  She’s an innocent girl.  She could be my sister or your sister.  What has she done to deserve what we’re putting her through?  She has to be home with her mother and father, eating well and sleeping peacefully.”
  “It’s not us.  We’re not the problem.  Her own grandfather is.  He is the one who decided to put her through all this.  Only Allah knows why.  Why do educated people do stupid things?  A whole doctor, he should have more sense than that.  We’re just uneducated people drawn into this because we want the cash.  But, she could have ended up in the wrong hands.  Just think about that.”
  “I’m still not sure that she ended up in the right hands,”   Okota said as she picked up Baaba’s lunch and led Mahmoud into the hallway.  “ Nii Darku has become a monster overnight.”
  “Don’t worry about him.  I don’t think he really wants to kill her.”
  “I won’t let him.  I swear I won’t.  I thought he brought me into this because he knows I like  kids.  My younger brother died of measles when he was only five years old.  Every kid in trouble reminds me of him.”
Okota wanted to say more but he had to stop in order to hold back tears.
Nii Darku heard the others talking in the hallway.  He thought they may be plotting against him so he went to join them.

  “Chaley, you guys know I  don’t really mean we should kill the girl, right?”
  “Shhh!”  Okota hissed,  inclining his head towards the room in which the girl lay sleeping.  All three of them tiptoed into the kitchen.  Okota put  Baaba’s neglected lunch on the counter.  As he got ready to wash his hands and take her dinner down to her, he saw Nii Darku bring out a joint from his pocket, place it between his lips  and get ready to light it.  Okota snatched the joint, saying, “if we’re going to think clearly through this  situation, neither of us must hire a lawyer!”
Both Nii Darku and Mahmoud laughed in spite of themselves.